ESSAY (MAIN BODY) The Privacy and Security of smart cities

 


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  1. From the start I suggest you should have a topic. The first paragraph should have a thesis statement or aim of the essay which would inform your reader ahead, You have missed that in the introduction. Have a relook at your introduction and then let each paragraph have a link or direct flow to the next one. More improvement is required.

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