SOFTWARE/HARDWARE SKILLS
I have used Website Wix, draw.io, word, excel and I have never engaged in any programming language because this is my first time, well I have Used special hardware in e-commerce computing such as website Wix, draw.io, excel. but I would love to learn new things hopefully in this module (computer skills and research) I would learn so many things and it would be great. I can use website Wix to sell my products. and the website Wix will help me in future such as online business. Thank you!

From the start I suggest you should have a topic. The first paragraph should have a thesis statement or aim of the essay which would inform your reader ahead, You have missed that in the introduction. Have a relook at your introduction and then let each paragraph have a link or direct flow to the next one. More improvement is required.
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